Tokimeki Memorial 4 v0.44: playtesting to August
This round was different. Instead of checking screens one at a time, I sat down and played Tokimeki Memorial 4 in English, from the first day of school all the way to the start of summer break. I picked Hoshikawa Maki, went on a few dates, lost a lot of races on purpose so I could screenshot them, and wrote down everything that still looked off.
Three patches later (v0.42, v0.43 and now v0.44), most of that list is fixed.

English from the very first screen
The autosave notice you see before the title screen is English now, and so is the title menu, including Omake.

The phone
The newsletter ads were already in English, but the small text on them was blurry when the phone stretched it to fill the screen. All 42 cards got clearer lettering, and the little notes in the corner are easier to read.


Calling someone now asks "Call Okura Miyako?" in English, and the Inbox shows full names instead of cutting them off at seven letters.


Sports day
The sports festival minigames are where a lot of the pictures I'd redrawn finally got tested for real. The race starts with "On your marks!", runners have English name tags, and the chalkboards explaining the controls are clean now. My earlier version left a smudge where the Japanese used to be.


Lots of little things
- The Join Club screen shows the club names in English.
- The item shop and Dress Up screens got checked in game.
- The Japanese quote brackets around spoken lines and menu choices are gone.
- The exam results sheet, the skill menu tabs and the minigame rankings got English labels.
- The amusement spot is now the Game Center, with its prize corner and video game corner.
- Date invitations read naturally, like "later this month on day 31".

What's next
Playing for real showed me a few bigger things to fix: name entry needs a rework, there are faint lines under some text, and the game froze once right after saving. Those come next, along with more of the story text.
There's no patch to download yet. When there is, I'll announce it here.
Unofficial and made for fun.
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